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Friday, July 26, 2013

Twisted Chapter 2

Chapter 2 is here!! Chapter 3 coming soon!! Also 2 book reviews, hopefully, should I video them and post em or type it?? Anyway get to reading loves!

*Paisley's POV* 
Walking up the steps where Aiden and I had our first kiss, I took a deep breath and knocked knowing his mom would be the one to answer the door. When she answered she smiled knowing I was here to see Aiden. 
As I walked into his room I heard my phone chime, ignoring it because it ruined my sneaky entrance. He was waiting with a smile at my failed sneak in. I walked over to the edge of the bed where he sat "happy six months" I said with a smile as I was standing between his thighs. He kissed me and had his hands under my shirt when I stopped and whispered "your mom is still here" into his ear. "My truck is right outside" he mumbled with a smile. We have had so many makeout sessions in the bed of his truck. Never any further, he'd asked but never pushed the topic of having sex. 
Walking to the end of the driveway to Aiden's truck, the old white ford sat there looking like it longed for us to be in the seats. I knew exactly where we would go, our field. 
... 
*Shain's POV* 
I can't keep fighting this, I can't call Alex, I need comfort. I need a drink. Where's that whiskey I had hidden in my room? ...Mattress. My shot glass to. Time to drink everything away. 
*Alex's POV* 
Paisley ain't answering her damn phone. She's probably havin sex with Aiden, fuckin asshole he stole her away like a fine piece of jewelery. Hell she's probably with Shain. They're too close to be just friends. There's an odd passion between them. I don't understand. 
*Keylee's POV* 
Jace's words still rang in my ears after a whole week. I should probably talk to him, but I have no clue what to say. 
*Jennifer's POV* 
So here I am up in this club on teen night trying to find someone to take me home. 
... 
The biggest giggle escaped my lips as he tickled me with his hair. Laying in only my bra and underwear with my legs around him I fumbled with the button of his jeans. When I felt a little packet in his pocket and pulled it out. Crack. He darkly smiled "don't you want some?". Not sure about whether to say yes or no. Stupidity taking over I said yes and we snorted it from my bedside table. I'd have said it was the best in my life but I didn't even remember what he looked like.
Sorry it's kind of short, I'm not sure how long or short chapter 3 is but I promise chapter 4 is worth reading :) ALSO if you wouldn't mind voting on Wattpad because you liked it so much, that would be great.

Thursday, July 25, 2013

Ready for chapter 2??

So as you can tell from the post below I posted chapter 1 of Twisted. I am thinking about posting it on Tumblr to, but I first want to know if anyone wants me to post chapter 2. I don't mind, I have every chapter typed except for chapter 5 because it isn't finished. So tell me!! Please!! Don't leave me in the dark!

Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Twisted ch1 (complete)

A/N This is originally posted on Wattpad so maybe if you like it well enough you will vote for it?! :) Please? I'll leave a link at the bottom :)
Twisted Chapter One

*Paisley's POV*
Everything I've on doesn't seem right! Ugh! I hate surprises. I have no clue what happened to Aiden but he's turned into this crazy romantic. I mean he's like my bestfriend but something has so changed.
...
FINALLY!!! I found the perfect thing to wear. A little blue dress, oh and I can so rock my converse with it. Me and Aiden are going on a date but I have no clue where.
...
He's taking me to the Spaghetti Factory! They have the best best salad. It's amazing, but the ice cream oh its gross
"Paisley, eat the ice cream just one time."
"Aiden it's always nutty tasting."
"It will be good this time I promise and I'm on a diet so I can't eat both of them." He grinned when he said it
"Ok I'll eat some but only the chocolate."
I took a bite and he started eating his and smiling like a blabbering idiot the whole time.
All of a sudden there was something sticking out of the ice cream. I poked it with my spoon and saw that he was starring at me with a lustfully amazed look. I picked it up and it was a ring! With two stones a March birth stone and a November one.
"It's a promise ring, custom for us. I have one to it's in my pocket, it's just a band though, with the day we started dating engraved in it."
"Aiden..you are my favorite person right now and foever."
...
*Jace POV* 
I can't keep being a player, I'm nineteen years old. I need to learn to treat a girl right. Who is the one girl I can't seem to let go of? Keylee. Keylee, Keylee, Keylee. She may be the only girl to actually grab my attention in a goodway and keep it. I should probably call her....
"Hey.."
"Hey, it's me..again"
"It's the third time this week, is something wrong that you wanna talk about?" 
"Yeah."
"Jace,...what is it?"
"..You"
"What do you mean me?"
"I've been in love with you for months and can't seem to get you off my mind."
"Jace why have you waited months to tell me this?"
"I don't know, I guess I needed to grow up."
".....Oh...."
"You mean too much for me to hurt you and make you cry again"
"Can I call you tomorrow?"
"Ye-" She hung up on me, was she actually going to call me tomorrow or would that just be false hope..
...
*Alex POV*
"Alex, I've known about it for two months!"
"Known what?" I screamed, even though I knew but I really didn't wanna admit it. I had been cheating on Shain for four months now.
"About you and your many different lovers!" Shain sounded so upset. I know he's head over heels for me but I just couldn't feel the same, I hated leading him on but I couldn't let go. Basically everyone knew I had been leading him on for a while now.
"Shain, you know what you are?"
"What am I Alex?"
"Full of it, making up stuff in you head, blaming me for what you know you're actually doing behind my back and I can't take it anymore." With that I got up and left only looking back when I shut the door, only to see a look of hurt, confusion, and astonishment. 
...
*Shain POV*
Did she really just call me crazy?! Maybe I was crazy? No. I know what I saw. She was all over him. Like an animal. It was discusting. She's never even tried to act like that with me. I fell for her harder than I ever have for anyone else. I need to wipe these tears off my face and probably take a really long shower.
Well here I am cleaning me and my mess up. I should have never went back to my roots. Damn razors. I should never have started shaving, that was just tempting myself.
...
*Jennifer's POV*
"Oh my God! That was amazing!" I said breathlessly, "where did you learn to do that?"
He grinned, "practice makes perfect I guess."
Damn. "Let's do it again!" I giggled and then went back over to him.
"Start from the beginning and everything?"

"Yes, I'll go put my clothes back on to!"


So what did you think?? Comment, tweet me, email, whatever. BUT please tell me!!

Monday, July 22, 2013

Dark Niall Fanfic Review

Dark Niall!!
Amazing! Intense and s-e-x-u-a-l.
Yes I loved it, yes it's complete and yes there's a sequel.
It was originally written by 1Dsnowflake97 on Wattpad but the story was deleted because Wattpad believed it was a copyright of Dark, which if you haven't read it's really good, it isn't a copy right of Dark. The story was reposted by someone else named clairbear33. 
**** 4 stars! Woop woop. 
It's got drugs, sex, creepy stalker brothers, and Zayn!

GO READ IT!!
 www.wattpad.com/story/4509000-dark-niall

Yes there is a sequel and it's called Dark Lillie, the story is on 1Dsnowflake's page, it also is really good but unlike Dark Niall it is not completed, but it does get updated just about every week.

Saturday, July 20, 2013

With Luck and Twisted

With Luck
Hey guys this is my first story and it's kinda jacked up. Not really but it would be awesome if ya'll would read it, that would be great! BUT please comment/tweet/message me any idea you have for it to continue! Don't just leave me hanging like a dick in the wind. Thanks.
http://www.wattpad.com/9786210-with-luck#.UesZNo03vO0

Twisted
This is my second story and no it is not a sequel to With Luck. This story in my opinion seems to be doing really well, I won't even lie. I haven't gotten bad writer's block yet or anything! All ideas you give me I will give you credit of if I use them, which I hope to!
http://www.wattpad.com/20010981-twisted#.UesY7Y03vO0


Twitter: @pay6ton

For both stories I won't update til I get at least two comments on both. So if ya'll want to help me get that goal and update the story. Thanks!!!

Thursday, July 18, 2013

CASEY ANTHONY PREGNANT?! TRUE OR NOT?

BULLSHIT!!!!

So supposedly Casey Anthony is pregnant again, what?! Has to be bullcrap. I HOPE it's bullcrap, especially because the only post I've seen about it is National Enquirer's post. The post said that the man was very wealthy, that Casey is having twins, and PLANNING TO NAME ONE CAYLEE!!! WHAT THE HELL!!! Who does that?! The post then went on to say that the man/father is Charlie Sheen. At this point I knew that majority or the whole post was not true. If Casey Anthony is really pregnant good for her, not the poor child. If Casey Anthony really isn't pregnant again then that's even better but whoever's sick twisted mind made that up is purely evil.


What do you think? Any other sources proving whether this is true or not? Tell me!!! EMAIL ME!! Include links and pictures!!

Sunday, July 14, 2013

RIP Cory Monteith

OMG!! NO!! CAN'T BE TRUE, RIGHT?!
WRONG!!!

Sadly it's all true, Cory Monteith was found dead in his hotel room because he didn't check out on time. First thing I see when I log onto Facebook this morning is People Magazine's article, hoping it wasn't true and reading it anyway I was informed otherwise. Sadly the Glee star with big brown eyes named Finn Hudson, who was caught singing in the shower and blackmailed into joining the Glee club, is no longer with us.

I really wish this wasn't true and that it was a publicity stunt like Kim Khardasian's wedding and divorce within 72 days, but no, no it's not.

www.people.com/people/gallery/0,,20717342,00.html
 These are some pictures of the famous Cory Monteith. Another sad realization is these are the last pictures we will ever see of him smiling/alive.

www.people.com/people/article/0,,20717317,00.html
The article that broke my heart because it confirmed everything I feared was real.

Ending on another link, someone posted a farewell letter and I would like to share it, keep in mind I had no part in writing this but I did read it and appreciated it very much. To whoever wrote it, because I only know your user name, THANK YOU!!

www.wattpad.com/20861938-rip-cory-monteith-1982-2013#.UeMTYVPjaWg

Along with what Taylor Swift tweeted, "speechless and for the worst reason", agreed Taylor.
May Lea Michele have the privacy she asked for, may Cory stay in our hearts and on our screens, may his family & close friends get the prayers they need for this tough time.

Rest In Peace Cory

Thursday, July 4, 2013

Harry Styles Fanfic Dark Review.

HOLY JESUS! I look at Harry Styles in a totally different light now. I'm not sure if thats a good thing or a bad thing but there is no going back now, ever.

So Dark is this fanfic about Harry Styles and a girl named Boo who happen to cross paths at a party and fall in love, have some sex and fall harder. Harry is REALLY protective because of his dark past, hence the name. Sometimes Boo feels its overbearing but deals with it. 
OMG! The feels. Like even though this is not based off an actual true story you can so feel the passion they have for each other and the emotions in everything! It's what kept me reading. Very few things that I've read had such emotion behind it, not sure if it takes talent given by the author or real effort. Whatever it is definitely makes the read worth it.

The story is on tumblr and wattpad, that I know for a fact. I'm not sure about any other sites possibly onedirectionfanfiction.com 
Either way go check it out! As of right now the story has 52 or 53 chapters but not all reposts have all chapters. The story also isn't complete so if you finish check back to find new chapters

Friday, June 14, 2013

New story sneak peek at chapter 1!

A/N This needs a title and any ideas you have really are helpful!! So feel free!

*Paisley's POV*
Everything I've put on doesn't seem right. Ugh! I hate surprises. I have no clue what happened to Aiden but he's turned into this crazy romantic. I mean he's like my bestfriend but something with him has changed

...
FINALLY!!! I found the perfect thing to wear. A little royal blue dress, oh and I can so rock my converse with it to! Aiden and I are supposed to have a date night but it's really hard to look forward to that when I have no clue where we're going.

A/N So tell me what you think guys!! and feel free to comment any ideas you have!


Sunday, June 9, 2013

I'm On Wattpad to!!

http://www.wattpad.com/9786210-with-luck#.UbVaGqKsiSo

This is called With Luck, so far it only has a prologue and a filler chapter. If you want more or have any ideas please comment or message me on Wattpad. Anything! It really is helpful!!!