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Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Twisted Chapter 6

*Paisley POV*
Did Aiden basically just sound jealous of Shain? Seriously? He should really know that I love him more than I do Shain. Aiden has never put me through half of the emotional torture Shain has, not even half of the half! I see where he's coming from though, I can't seem to let go of Shain as a best-friend or close friend. I probably should let go of him for a while and come back as a distant friend, that'll be really hard especially af- I was pulled out of my trance by Aiden's voice.
"Paisley, you never told us why Shain was so mad earlier."
"Well he caught Alex cheating on him and then she broke up with him. So he's been heart broken all week and he's been callin me but I haven't been checking my phone so I didn't know, because I was with you. He thinks you stole me away from all of our friends. He found out that I knew about Alex the whole time, both times. So he's been calling and calling, drinking and cutting again. When I didn't answer him he got pissed. When I left your house earlier I checked my phone for the first time and heard all his voicemails, along with Alex's. I pulled over and cried, hard, so when you called me earlier I really was crying I just didn't want to tell you because I didn't know the whole story. I hauled ass over to his house only to have bruised hips and-"
"He hurt your hips?" Jace and Aiden spoke at the same time and looked at each other with a worried look, Aiden spoke first. "Did he try to have sex with you?"
"No! I tried to run and he grabbed me but I was holdin on to the door way. His room smelt really strong of alcohol and we all know what goes down when he's been drinking a lot, Aiden he's drinkin' again."
Shain has had some drinking problems in the past, he was always drinkin', the hard liqour to. It was well known that he kept whiskey under his mattress, along with other things that got drank before anyone could remember the name of them. He's a violent drunk and after a while he's a horny drunk. Shain didn't try to hide his nasty habit either, we helped him quit, for the most part. He was really willing.
Aiden and Jace looked at each other in the front seat, again. Jace spoke up first, "no parties for him, for a while, again".
"At all", Aiden agreed even though I knew he didn't want to help Shain.
"Aiden, who do you plan on adding into our group?" Jace asked for me, thank sweet fields of bacon.
I thought for a second, who are we gonna add in? More than likely Milk. That kid is something else. No one, well no one we know, knows his real name. He's been friends with us since kindergarden and had a milk mustache a lot because all he wanted was milk. So everyone just started calling him Milk and it kinda stuck, even teachers call him milk. He has jet black hair and brown eyes, a good sense of humor, and towers me in height, like a lot of people. I loved hanging out with him, when him and Aiden get together they crack me up. I wonder what throwing Jace into this equation will do, hopefully make the laughs ten times better.
"Aiden who are you going to add in?" I asked.
"Milk of course!"
"Possibly Ian to", Jace threw in.
Ian is a complete jerk, thinks everyone is in love with him and wants in his pants. Which no one wants in his pants! Not me anyway. Aiden and Jace seem to be like his best-friends, and claim it! I mean Ian and I get along, that's it. No further, no matter how well known he makes it that he wants more.
...
*Jennifer's POV*
So apparently Alex and Shain broke up. Facebook is an amazing place for information, especially since I see Alex talking about hurting an amazing guy, but he just wasn't for her blah blah blah. Bitch. I snickered thinking she probably thinks the same about me. Pardon me for being the first to get Shain's heart beating, pardon me for fixing him when she left him high and dry the first time. I fixed his drinking, not her or Paisley. Then he decided she was more important, probably because her ass is bigger than mine. Well he's broken and beaten, probably back to his old ways. I lowly laughed and closed my laptop as I got my keys and headed to Victoria's Secret and Walmart. Lingerie, check, lube, check, condoms, check. This will be fun..
...
*Keylee's POV*
Doing the dishes like every normal teenager on a Saturday night. Nothin’ sounds more fun than ruining a manicure you haven’t even had yet because your grandparents are too cheap to buy a dishwasher. One more plate and spork then I’m done, then I’m popping some popcorn and watchin’ some of Doctor Who on Netflix. Yes I have Netflix but not a dishwasher. I’ve never watched Doctor Who but I’ve really wanted to so tonight sounds like a really good night to do so.
Waiting on the popcorn to finish my home phone rang, because everyone knows I don’t use it if I’m at home, not being in a hurry to answer it so I ended up answering it on the last ring.
“Hello.”
“Hey its Paisley put real clothes on and yes you can bring your popcorn with you, don’t ask how I know what you’re doing because I’m sitting in your driveway looking in your kitchen window, by the way you have the curtains pulled back.”
Typical Paisley, talking ninety miles an hour but gets the whole point across.
“Bu-but I was gonna watch Doctor Who finally..”
“Suck it up like soup ‘cause you coming with me.”
Well way to put it nicely. I guess I should but jeans on, but if she can see me I can go grab them from the laundry room beside the kitchen, I don’t know who’s in the car with her.
“Wait, is Jace with you?”
“Yes and no you cannot bail on me because of it either, suck it up like soup.”
*Paisley POV*
When Keylee reached the car you could basically see her holding her breath because of Jace. I thought they were on speaking terms, but I guess I had missed something within my week long hibernation. That’s definitely something I was going to find out later, when we were alone or send the guys to get food, or something.
“Glad to see you gave up your Netflix night for us.” I said as she got in the car and I scooted out of the middle and into the window seat on the left.
“You have no idea how hard it was to make that decision.” She said sarcastically as I stole some popcorn from her bag.
Aiden spoke up, “we’re going to go find Milk now right? Ok good.”
Replying to his self-decided statement, “Ha way to let us answer for ourselves Aiden.”
*Aiden POV*
Calling Milk as I was in his driveway, “Hey man we got people to annoy and see.”
“Sorry dude, date night at my place with ma-ladady”, he didn’t just say that. He did.
“When did you get yourself a girlfriend?” Jace looked over at me with a questioned look on his face.
“She’s not my girlfriend, yet, but after tonight when she meets my mouth she’ll be begging me not to let go.” Oh my lacrosse team.
“You’re bringing her with you.”
“Damn, I am not allowing to make any decisions”, he laughed.
“Is she with you, tell her change of plans and by the way you gotta go in your car, can you go get Ian to while you’re at it.”
We hung up and Jace finally asked the question he’d obviously been dying to ask, “when the hell did Milk get a girlfriend?”

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Here's Milk!
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Twisted Characters for chapters 1-5

Ever wanted to know what the characters of Twisted would look like if it were a movie/tv show? No? Well you're going to find out. I'm going to start at the most important and work my way down.

Paisley Owens, the main character. Most things happen from her point of view, especially after the story gets going.

Aiden Baker, Paisley's boyfriend who loves her beyond a shadow of a doubt.

Shain Wells, Paisley's bestfriend. Shain causes more trouble than it's all worth.
Alex Givens, Shain's ex-girlfriend, she's Paisley's "friend"
Jace Ross, Aiden's brother-like best friend. Jace seems to always be at the right place at the right time with the right words for everyone but himself and Keylee.
Keylee Payne, Paisley's right hand woman, wing woman.
Jennifer Cook, she seems to have plans of her own.



A/N Hey Loves! I decided that while you're waiting for an update you can have an idea of what my characters look like, will post more characters as the story continues! Well later Loves, stay groovy!!

Sunday, July 28, 2013

Twisted Chapter 5

A/N Here it is Loves! Chapter 5, bare with me while I'm writing chapter 6, shouldn't take long but you never know when writer's block is going to attack! *Knock on wood*

I wasn't leaving anytime soon. I wanted to know why Aiden and Jace were here. 
"No, he'll hurt him!" I whined 
"Or you", Jace looked down at me. 
I knew Jace was right but I wasn't going to just leave because he said so. I knew how Shain's temper worked, and it wasn't like Aiden's. I'd never seen Aiden mad like this, he's always so calm. Shain and I have argued a lot, he'd made me cry, worry, and love him. Not in the way I loved Aiden, Aiden is my protector but I seem to be Shain's protector, I'm always defending him when I shouldn't. I have a nothing-will-ever-change-our-friendship kind of love with Shain, I have to fight for it but I have it and I am not letting go of it. He'd broken my heart and put it back together again. He was the first guy to make me cry. I've never had him try to physically hurt me. No matter how much he deserved it, I couldn't sit around and let him get pulverized. 
Stepping around Jace I got in front of Aiden, where he had Shain pinned against the wall. The vein in his neck was popped out, I knew he wasn't going to just snap out of it, standing in front of him. "Aiden", I repeated his name until he looked at me, hard blue eyes going soft. "Aiden, stop. Be the bigger person." He stepped back for a second. "So you're just gonna let him go after what he did?" Aiden snapped. 
"Aiden go to the car", he started walking out the door as Jace turned to leave. 
"No Jace don't leave." I turned my head as I spoke. Turning my head back to Shain, "it's probably best if you leave now so I can lotion up to the thought of you, or you can take care of it", he rudely grinned. I kneed him. I moved my head to his ear even though he was still trying to slide down the wall. "Maybe when you can behave like you and I both know you can I'll come back, but until then you can scar yourself. When you get to hurtin' again do not call me." I kneed him one more time for good luck and walked away with Jace following, only to find Aiden leaned up against the back of the couch with his arms crossed in the living room. 
"I thought I told you to go to the car." 
"Yeah well I didn't want to have to run all the way back through the house." I could tell this would be an argument later. 
Jace chimed in, "He wasn't going to touch her with me around but it seems your baby doll here is a little scraper, bad-ass move must I say", he was smiling. 
Aiden looked at me, "what did you do?" 
"Later, after we get in the car and you explain why you're here and not on your family night." I kissed his cheek. 
... 
Sitting in the backseat of Jace's car, the silence was killing me. I finally asked why Aiden and Jace showed up in the first place. 
"Well about twenty-minutes after I got out of the shower my mom got called in and my brother decided to go hang with Steve so I was gonna hang at home and wait for you." Makes sense. Aiden's mom is a nurse, mostly on call. 
Jace took over where Aiden left off. "So I called Aiden to see if he wanted to get the gang back together and hang out like we used to and that's how we end up at Shain's, to see if ya'll wanted to come hang to." I sat there a second. "So I guess that won't happen with all that's going on." 
Aiden laughed, "we'll just leave a couple people out til the dust settles because we all know that nothing will come between you and Shain..no matter how much people don't like it", he lost all the happiness in his voice," but while we are waiting for apologizes and late night heart to hearts we will just add in a couple replacements."

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Twisted Chapter 4

A/N So here's chapter 4, still currently working on chapter 5. Chapter 5 should be up really soon! I'm thinking about adding a couple of things to my blog posts, more information at the end. Enjoy Loves!

*Paisley's POV*
When I got in my car and got ready to head home I saw that my phone had done everything but exploded between Alex and Shain.  I hadn't really talked to either one in a couple days. Not purposely, I just kinda put my phone off to the side for a couple days.
When I heard Shain's voicemails I had to pull over and cry, hard. After about twenty minutes I decided I needed to clean myself up and continue driving my black jeep, to where I wasn't sure. This drive used to be so pretty in the summer, I'd take my time just to see all the open fields. Right now I was driving like Danica Patrick and the roads seemed endless. I didn't like Shain feeling like that, it hurt to know he was in pain. He was literally my bestfriend. I mean there was Keylee but he came right behind her, but in first place for a guy. My phone started ringing and scared me. I swerved and it fell into the floor board. "Shit". I sniffed because my nose was still running. I pulled over again and answered seeing it was Aiden.
"Hello" I managed trying not to let my voice reveal that I had been crying. 
"Paisley? Are you okay? You sound like you've been crying." Well crap. I can't tell him.
"..Uh..no. Well yeah kinda sorta yeah..not really."
"What?" Umm.
"I almost hit a squirrel. It scared me, I didn't cry but I swerved because I wasn't expecting it."
"Oh.." He didn't sound convinced but I couldn't really tell him about Shain. It wasn't my place.
"Yeah, uh, sorry if you got worried."
"Haha just a little, I was calling to tell you something but about the time you answered I forgot what I was gonna say", you could hear the smile in his voice.
"Well that sounds like me."
"Great minds think alike I guess, I'm gonna get in the shower to go on my family night".
"Okay I'm gonna be with Shain".
...
"Shain, open up!" I yelled as I knocked on the door.
I heard footsteps and, "aw shit, damn dog and what the the hell is he doin' naked?!", before Shain loudly opened the opened the door. His blonde hair a mess, green eyes red from either being high or crying, he wasn't wearing a shirt or pants just boxers and one sock.
"Where the hell have you been?" he snapped.
"Sorry.. I hadn't answered anyone if it helps any". I quietly mumbled with my head down.
"It's okay I get it. You finally have sex with Aiden and forget us all. No problem". Harsh. Ouch.
"I most certainly have not" I said after I picked up my jaws from the floor. "I didn't come here to get insulted. I cried the whole way here and it would be nice id you didn't shatter my heart again." I tried to make my tone sound stern, not sure how well it worked.
"I didn't mean to hurt you. I never wanted that!" He raised his voice like a child getting scalded about something again.
"Yeah well it happened and we can't change it. Now let me in and I don't mean just in the house."
He starred at me, "Shain don't make me let myself in", I tried to stand my ground. 
"Okay, okay" he seemed defeated.
As I sat down on a chair in the corner of his bedroom I realized no one was home.
"She ripped my heart out and stomped it to a bloody pulp and kept me holding on." He finally admitted after a long silence.
"Oh Shain, I knew this would happen. Why did ya'll break up?"
"I told her I knew about her cheating on me".
Pained because I knew and didn't have the guys or balls to tell him. I closed my eyes.
"Oh God! You knew didn't you!"
My eyes shot open at what he said.
Not being able to look at him in the eyes, "she lead you on, the whole time first it was just her texting other guys behind you back and her wanting to make you jealous. Because she wanted you to break up with her so she could play the victim. When I realized her intentions I wanted to tell you, oh did I wanna tell you so bad, but she was like don't tell him and I wanted to tell you but I was afraid you would say something to her and I didn't want more drama." I closed my eyes as a tear fell. "Please don't be mad." I whispered.
"I can't believe you knew the whole fucking time!" He jumped up from the bed. I was terrified, not sure why. I guess because we were alone and I would have to go through him to run out the door. He started pacing, everything told me to bolt for the door, something made me stay.
"I knew this would happen.." I trailed off as I spoke. He stopped pacing and looked at me. "What exactly? Me with a broken heart, wanting to know why she couldn't have just ended it or you feeling like you should come baby sit and comfort me days after I call you or me being past hurt and now pissed?"
Taking a deep breath and letting it out as I spoke, "everything".
"Hmph".
Suddenly angered I snapped, "what do you mean hmph?"
He glared at me. "Well maybe if you didn't have Aiden shoved up your ass we'd be having a different conversation."
I quickly jumped up. "He is not shoved up my ass!"
"Oh really? Where did you come from?" He knew exactly because if I had come from any other direction I'd have come from the other end of his street and parked in the yard not the driveway because I was just a bitch I guess. " Whose the last person you talked to on the phone because I know it wasn't me." He was walking closer to me. 
"Aiden's house and Aiden if you must know! Pardon the fuck out of me for being able to fall in love and not get lead on and get my heart crumbled because you couldn't stay hard in the bed and fell too hard for the wrong person. Pardon me for not wanting you to fall back to your new habits that everyone seems to have inherited and pardon me for rushing over here with tears in my eyes. Sorry for loving you more than I should and not telling anyone." I bolted for the door trying to hide the tears. Before I could get out the doorway Shain grabbed my waist with both arms wrapped completely around me. I grabbed the doorframe.
"You're not going anywhere so stop trying, you and I both know I'm stronger than you." He growled in my ear as my eyes went wide knowing what he was referring to. We'd been alone just like this and things got heated. I gave him my virginity without a second thought and he gave me his. Shortly after him and Alex had been together but right before me and Aiden decided to get together. We both swore to never mention it.
"Sh-Shain please don't hurt me." I whispered
"I could feel his grin against my ear, "never", he whispered against it.
He picked me up and turned me towards him. He tucked hair behind my ear. "Why would I do that to my bestfriend now? Oh thats right she withheld important information from me!" He shook me and tightened his grip. His green eyes went so dark.
"I-I'm so sorry" I managed.
He turned still holding me and tossed me to the bed, which wasn't far but I thought I was gonna die. I knew my hips would be sore from his tight hold he had had on them.\
As I landed I crawled backwards towards the middle. He slammed the door and walked towards the end of the bed. He reached for me but I crawled back further but not fast enough before he grabbed my left ankle and pulled me towards him as he grabbed my right one. He pulled me to the end of the bed and stood between my thighs. "Paisley, look at me." He said quietly. I wasn't sure if he was not pissed anymore or turning evil. I sat up thinking maybe I'd have a better chance if I could jump and grab something.
"You don't know how sorry you should be." Yeah not calm, he's went evil. He was laying me back and he pinned me but left my arms free. "I was really happy when you and Aiden decided to be more than friends. I'd been waiting a long time and we all figured you had a thing for him to, but he can't just come in and sweep you off your feet and take you away from us. I'd like to say oh hey wanna hang like we used to but no one ever replies so what's the point?" I pushed on his chest and his hands were on each side of my stomach and he pressed down, the harder I tried to push him off the harder he pressed down. I cried out. "Oh don't like that do ya? That's kinda what getting your heart shattered feels like but in your chest. You already know that though." He bent his head down to my ear, "don't ya?"
Please find the inner strength to get him off of me. I was begging myself and anything or anyone that would listen. 
"Paisley, I asked you a question. Are you going to answer or make this worse for yourself?" He moved his knee up to stop just in front of my crotch. 
"Ye-yes I do". I stumbled
"That's right-". He was ripped away only to reveal Aiden and Jace.
"Ja-Jace?" I questioned

"Yeah it's me now come one before Aiden blacks his eye." I ran to him and heard Aiden shout "touch her again and you're dead!" I looked up at Jace "oh shit". My eyes were big. He looked down at me, "yeah oh shit now come on."


A/N CONTINUED..
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Twisted Chapter 3

A/N I am currently writing chapter 5, so after I post 4 it might be a little longer between posts from here on out. Sorry Loves! 

*Shain's POV*
Taking a hushed breath I shakily said "..Paisley.. please answer..I'm hurtin'...booze ain't helpin..pills have been all used up..I-I don't know what to do anymore..I ca-can't shave because thats just just teasing myself. I need you, more than ever right now, please don't shut me out like I did you, please."
*Paisley's POV*
Sitting in our field for the third time this week. "Aiden, I should really be gettin' home. They're gonna wonder where I am and my phone is in your room."
"Honey you worry too much."
I sighed "I guess so".
Looking down at my promise ring I think about staying this way forever. He had customized it with everything he knew was important to me with our names coming last on the inside. On the outside were two stones, a november and march birthstone, eternity symbol, a cross, and the word Faith for reasons few knew about, but only he knew how much it meant to me. I smiled thinking about the thought he had put behind it to make it special for only one person. Me.
*Jace's POV*
Taking a coffee from work to go, I slumped across the parking lot to my car and just sat in it. For how long I didn't know. I was drawn out of my trance by a tap on my window. Keylee. I never expected to see her this soon. Actually I didn't even remember how long it had been since I called her.
"Can I interrupt?" She said with a smile as I rolled the window down.
"Yeah I wasn't doing anything just thinking and starring off into space. How 'bout you?"
"Oh you know the usual flying through space to find your stare." She smiled.
I liked her playful tone because it meant she couldn't be here to reject me, harshly anyway.
"Keylee..I-I-" She cut me off.
"Stop, I've got something to say. You played me. You teased me. Made me cry. Twisted my emotions. Shattered me only to build me back up to knock me right back down. Why on Earth would I want to continue any kind of relationship with you?" She looked at me, her green eyes full of hurt.
"Keylee, I-" She cut me off again.
"I wasn't done. Jace I came back to you everytime. I'm here right now for reasons, the same reasons that make me take you back everytime, but I don't know or understand them. Does that make me stupid or just still in love with you? Just like how I ended up in a Starbucks parking lot at one in the morning knowing it's after curfew. I always seem to find you, even when you're the reason that my heart is being held in my chest by a fraction of a string. I didn't even intend on coming here. I was going for a drive to get you off my mind and before I know it I'm in the same car that I was once naked in the backseat of."
I had been sitting here that long..five hours. "That fight never should of happened" I say but can't take my eyes off the steering wheel.
She sighs, "..I know.." She said quietly. 
She knows exactly what I was talking about. It happened in my hallway while my parents were on vacation in Hawaii for their twenty-fifth anniversary.
"Jace I won't take you back right now. You have to prove you've changed over the last few months, it looks like you have but I need to know it's real." She says as she gets out of my car and I couldn't even ask for her to wait or stay. All I could do was watch her leave.
*Aiden's POV*
I love her, Paisley you know. The one you sent to me straight from heaven. Thanks for that by the way. I've fallen in such a short period of time, so hard to. Not sure if thats a good thing or  a bad thing but right now it's an amazing feeling. Well now that I'm done bending your ear God I'm gonna get out of this shower and put clothes on.
... 
"You love her don't you?" My mom asked. We were eating out, just us tonight. It's a rare thing, us being alone. 
"Yeah.." I trailed off as I looked away from her. I could sense her dark blue eyes on me. Which I seem to have inherited.
"I ask one thing." Her tone was serious. I looked up so that we were looking eye to eye.
"Don't do her wrong and don't lead her on."

"Mama you know I couldn't do that, not after the important people I know that have been done that way." I smiled but on the inside it made me mad that my no good dad couldn't stay around long enough to know my name. My brother on the other hand had a different dad case. His dad promised my mom the world and gave her hell, along with another child to raise alone. I couldn't change anything about it but I would never do that to anyone else.

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Friday, July 26, 2013

Twisted Chapter 2

Chapter 2 is here!! Chapter 3 coming soon!! Also 2 book reviews, hopefully, should I video them and post em or type it?? Anyway get to reading loves!

*Paisley's POV* 
Walking up the steps where Aiden and I had our first kiss, I took a deep breath and knocked knowing his mom would be the one to answer the door. When she answered she smiled knowing I was here to see Aiden. 
As I walked into his room I heard my phone chime, ignoring it because it ruined my sneaky entrance. He was waiting with a smile at my failed sneak in. I walked over to the edge of the bed where he sat "happy six months" I said with a smile as I was standing between his thighs. He kissed me and had his hands under my shirt when I stopped and whispered "your mom is still here" into his ear. "My truck is right outside" he mumbled with a smile. We have had so many makeout sessions in the bed of his truck. Never any further, he'd asked but never pushed the topic of having sex. 
Walking to the end of the driveway to Aiden's truck, the old white ford sat there looking like it longed for us to be in the seats. I knew exactly where we would go, our field. 
... 
*Shain's POV* 
I can't keep fighting this, I can't call Alex, I need comfort. I need a drink. Where's that whiskey I had hidden in my room? ...Mattress. My shot glass to. Time to drink everything away. 
*Alex's POV* 
Paisley ain't answering her damn phone. She's probably havin sex with Aiden, fuckin asshole he stole her away like a fine piece of jewelery. Hell she's probably with Shain. They're too close to be just friends. There's an odd passion between them. I don't understand. 
*Keylee's POV* 
Jace's words still rang in my ears after a whole week. I should probably talk to him, but I have no clue what to say. 
*Jennifer's POV* 
So here I am up in this club on teen night trying to find someone to take me home. 
... 
The biggest giggle escaped my lips as he tickled me with his hair. Laying in only my bra and underwear with my legs around him I fumbled with the button of his jeans. When I felt a little packet in his pocket and pulled it out. Crack. He darkly smiled "don't you want some?". Not sure about whether to say yes or no. Stupidity taking over I said yes and we snorted it from my bedside table. I'd have said it was the best in my life but I didn't even remember what he looked like.
Sorry it's kind of short, I'm not sure how long or short chapter 3 is but I promise chapter 4 is worth reading :) ALSO if you wouldn't mind voting on Wattpad because you liked it so much, that would be great.

Thursday, July 25, 2013

Ready for chapter 2??

So as you can tell from the post below I posted chapter 1 of Twisted. I am thinking about posting it on Tumblr to, but I first want to know if anyone wants me to post chapter 2. I don't mind, I have every chapter typed except for chapter 5 because it isn't finished. So tell me!! Please!! Don't leave me in the dark!

Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Twisted ch1 (complete)

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Twisted Chapter One

*Paisley's POV*
Everything I've on doesn't seem right! Ugh! I hate surprises. I have no clue what happened to Aiden but he's turned into this crazy romantic. I mean he's like my bestfriend but something has so changed.
...
FINALLY!!! I found the perfect thing to wear. A little blue dress, oh and I can so rock my converse with it. Me and Aiden are going on a date but I have no clue where.
...
He's taking me to the Spaghetti Factory! They have the best best salad. It's amazing, but the ice cream oh its gross
"Paisley, eat the ice cream just one time."
"Aiden it's always nutty tasting."
"It will be good this time I promise and I'm on a diet so I can't eat both of them." He grinned when he said it
"Ok I'll eat some but only the chocolate."
I took a bite and he started eating his and smiling like a blabbering idiot the whole time.
All of a sudden there was something sticking out of the ice cream. I poked it with my spoon and saw that he was starring at me with a lustfully amazed look. I picked it up and it was a ring! With two stones a March birth stone and a November one.
"It's a promise ring, custom for us. I have one to it's in my pocket, it's just a band though, with the day we started dating engraved in it."
"Aiden..you are my favorite person right now and foever."
...
*Jace POV* 
I can't keep being a player, I'm nineteen years old. I need to learn to treat a girl right. Who is the one girl I can't seem to let go of? Keylee. Keylee, Keylee, Keylee. She may be the only girl to actually grab my attention in a goodway and keep it. I should probably call her....
"Hey.."
"Hey, it's me..again"
"It's the third time this week, is something wrong that you wanna talk about?" 
"Yeah."
"Jace,...what is it?"
"..You"
"What do you mean me?"
"I've been in love with you for months and can't seem to get you off my mind."
"Jace why have you waited months to tell me this?"
"I don't know, I guess I needed to grow up."
".....Oh...."
"You mean too much for me to hurt you and make you cry again"
"Can I call you tomorrow?"
"Ye-" She hung up on me, was she actually going to call me tomorrow or would that just be false hope..
...
*Alex POV*
"Alex, I've known about it for two months!"
"Known what?" I screamed, even though I knew but I really didn't wanna admit it. I had been cheating on Shain for four months now.
"About you and your many different lovers!" Shain sounded so upset. I know he's head over heels for me but I just couldn't feel the same, I hated leading him on but I couldn't let go. Basically everyone knew I had been leading him on for a while now.
"Shain, you know what you are?"
"What am I Alex?"
"Full of it, making up stuff in you head, blaming me for what you know you're actually doing behind my back and I can't take it anymore." With that I got up and left only looking back when I shut the door, only to see a look of hurt, confusion, and astonishment. 
...
*Shain POV*
Did she really just call me crazy?! Maybe I was crazy? No. I know what I saw. She was all over him. Like an animal. It was discusting. She's never even tried to act like that with me. I fell for her harder than I ever have for anyone else. I need to wipe these tears off my face and probably take a really long shower.
Well here I am cleaning me and my mess up. I should have never went back to my roots. Damn razors. I should never have started shaving, that was just tempting myself.
...
*Jennifer's POV*
"Oh my God! That was amazing!" I said breathlessly, "where did you learn to do that?"
He grinned, "practice makes perfect I guess."
Damn. "Let's do it again!" I giggled and then went back over to him.
"Start from the beginning and everything?"

"Yes, I'll go put my clothes back on to!"


So what did you think?? Comment, tweet me, email, whatever. BUT please tell me!!

Monday, July 22, 2013

Dark Niall Fanfic Review

Dark Niall!!
Amazing! Intense and s-e-x-u-a-l.
Yes I loved it, yes it's complete and yes there's a sequel.
It was originally written by 1Dsnowflake97 on Wattpad but the story was deleted because Wattpad believed it was a copyright of Dark, which if you haven't read it's really good, it isn't a copy right of Dark. The story was reposted by someone else named clairbear33. 
**** 4 stars! Woop woop. 
It's got drugs, sex, creepy stalker brothers, and Zayn!

GO READ IT!!
 www.wattpad.com/story/4509000-dark-niall

Yes there is a sequel and it's called Dark Lillie, the story is on 1Dsnowflake's page, it also is really good but unlike Dark Niall it is not completed, but it does get updated just about every week.

Saturday, July 20, 2013

With Luck and Twisted

With Luck
Hey guys this is my first story and it's kinda jacked up. Not really but it would be awesome if ya'll would read it, that would be great! BUT please comment/tweet/message me any idea you have for it to continue! Don't just leave me hanging like a dick in the wind. Thanks.
http://www.wattpad.com/9786210-with-luck#.UesZNo03vO0

Twisted
This is my second story and no it is not a sequel to With Luck. This story in my opinion seems to be doing really well, I won't even lie. I haven't gotten bad writer's block yet or anything! All ideas you give me I will give you credit of if I use them, which I hope to!
http://www.wattpad.com/20010981-twisted#.UesY7Y03vO0


Twitter: @pay6ton

For both stories I won't update til I get at least two comments on both. So if ya'll want to help me get that goal and update the story. Thanks!!!

Thursday, July 18, 2013

CASEY ANTHONY PREGNANT?! TRUE OR NOT?

BULLSHIT!!!!

So supposedly Casey Anthony is pregnant again, what?! Has to be bullcrap. I HOPE it's bullcrap, especially because the only post I've seen about it is National Enquirer's post. The post said that the man was very wealthy, that Casey is having twins, and PLANNING TO NAME ONE CAYLEE!!! WHAT THE HELL!!! Who does that?! The post then went on to say that the man/father is Charlie Sheen. At this point I knew that majority or the whole post was not true. If Casey Anthony is really pregnant good for her, not the poor child. If Casey Anthony really isn't pregnant again then that's even better but whoever's sick twisted mind made that up is purely evil.


What do you think? Any other sources proving whether this is true or not? Tell me!!! EMAIL ME!! Include links and pictures!!

Sunday, July 14, 2013

RIP Cory Monteith

OMG!! NO!! CAN'T BE TRUE, RIGHT?!
WRONG!!!

Sadly it's all true, Cory Monteith was found dead in his hotel room because he didn't check out on time. First thing I see when I log onto Facebook this morning is People Magazine's article, hoping it wasn't true and reading it anyway I was informed otherwise. Sadly the Glee star with big brown eyes named Finn Hudson, who was caught singing in the shower and blackmailed into joining the Glee club, is no longer with us.

I really wish this wasn't true and that it was a publicity stunt like Kim Khardasian's wedding and divorce within 72 days, but no, no it's not.

www.people.com/people/gallery/0,,20717342,00.html
 These are some pictures of the famous Cory Monteith. Another sad realization is these are the last pictures we will ever see of him smiling/alive.

www.people.com/people/article/0,,20717317,00.html
The article that broke my heart because it confirmed everything I feared was real.

Ending on another link, someone posted a farewell letter and I would like to share it, keep in mind I had no part in writing this but I did read it and appreciated it very much. To whoever wrote it, because I only know your user name, THANK YOU!!

www.wattpad.com/20861938-rip-cory-monteith-1982-2013#.UeMTYVPjaWg

Along with what Taylor Swift tweeted, "speechless and for the worst reason", agreed Taylor.
May Lea Michele have the privacy she asked for, may Cory stay in our hearts and on our screens, may his family & close friends get the prayers they need for this tough time.

Rest In Peace Cory

Thursday, July 4, 2013

Harry Styles Fanfic Dark Review.

HOLY JESUS! I look at Harry Styles in a totally different light now. I'm not sure if thats a good thing or a bad thing but there is no going back now, ever.

So Dark is this fanfic about Harry Styles and a girl named Boo who happen to cross paths at a party and fall in love, have some sex and fall harder. Harry is REALLY protective because of his dark past, hence the name. Sometimes Boo feels its overbearing but deals with it. 
OMG! The feels. Like even though this is not based off an actual true story you can so feel the passion they have for each other and the emotions in everything! It's what kept me reading. Very few things that I've read had such emotion behind it, not sure if it takes talent given by the author or real effort. Whatever it is definitely makes the read worth it.

The story is on tumblr and wattpad, that I know for a fact. I'm not sure about any other sites possibly onedirectionfanfiction.com 
Either way go check it out! As of right now the story has 52 or 53 chapters but not all reposts have all chapters. The story also isn't complete so if you finish check back to find new chapters